literature

Bliss

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Literature Text

          Bliss
       a dream
   now made real
    embodied in
 the quiet whispers
of lovers in the dark.
I kept trying to write more lines of this, then I came back a few weeks later and said, "You know, I think I can stop with what I've got."

...Hm? Oh, the form? One syllable, two syllables, etc. :)
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incubustrav421's avatar
soft sweet and tender, thats what short but theme gives you ... speaks rhythms in the sense of vigor, great job :)

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